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Position:Home>Poetry> Do you like this little poem, which was deleted for solicitation earlier?Question: Do you like this little poem, which was deleted for solicitation earlier!? Prescience!? by C!.S!. Scotkin I see a sunny day on Mars A red reflection to the stars!. Air out the words within my head All musty from misuse, or dread!. I now must at the ready be, And may I take two cats with me!? Some books I will need for my mind And things less useful stay behind!. I need my brave computer, Jack I’ve no idea when we’ll be back When I’ve been to the Golden Dome Will I be missed at all, back home!? I see so many friends on Mars With Poems flying to the stars And am I up to this great trip!? Or will I write a Pome and slip!? I fear I write a pome tonight I pray it gives you some delight, Despite clichés to wish on stars, I hope to be with you on Mars!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Stop near the sun, Halfway to Mars, For Snicker's fun Or a Milky Way bar!. I eat space junk after I'm violated!. It soothes me!. Www@QuestionHome@Com You can take the cats and Jack, but jack might feel lonely!. The computers in the communal dome will be voice commanded, and use heads-up displays that will seem to float in mid-air!. The cats will even have holographic mice to play with, and maybe an egret or two to stalk!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Both this poem and your photo convince me that you are a sweet, smart, and cute lady!. I'm not sure why, but this put a big smile on my face!. I guess I don't really need to know why!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Strictly in accordance with community guidelines, I think Yahoo had the right idea first time round as far as the subject goes, but not necessarily on the grounds of solicitation!. The rhyme's okay though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think I shall go on to live on the moon I' ll take a guitar and some crazy old loon Twas the man on the moon who called for me So I shall go there for to be with he!.!. I shall wave to you all on Mars!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com We are together on Mars!. The stars you see are friends from earth who willingly made the journey to the Golden Dome of home!. Loved your poem!.tWww@QuestionHome@Com I like this poem I don't know why the deleted your poem but keep on writing you do good poetry they deleted mine as well called void it was about losing someoneWww@QuestionHome@Com Absolutely lovely !.Www@QuestionHome@Com A fine poem now, as it was before!. I can't remember what I wrote before!. D'oh! Press on we shall until that bright shining day comes!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it :) Solicitation!?! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com That's really cute!. Keep writing!. You're doing good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I love this, and I love you! Now, about those shoes!.!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I like this!. Can`t see why they would delete this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You are already there!Www@QuestionHome@Com They have a chair reserved in your name!.!.!.little card that says welcome, the whole nine yards!.Www@QuestionHome@Com How do I get there!? Love your little pome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com If one fine day I get to Mars Will I write poems as well As one who every effort bars Unvarnished truths to tell!. Would I be better than I am Or would I be quite worse And if the former would you dam My honeyed stream and curse!. Or would you then forgive my sins!? -- I know not what I've done!. On Earth the pure of spirit wins, With that I'm sure you'll run!. You've sold your soul to fantasy There is no Golden Dome -- There's only just this place you see The one that you call home!. But you are compensated yet For trips that you might miss; Just think of all the folks you've met And then remember this: One played with numbers, not with love, 'Twas all truth you were told!. The hawk you know; what of the dove, If I may be so bold!. I love this world, I think I'll stay, Where everything is real!. I'll think of you when you're away That much I will reveal!. But if you ever miss a beat And if I lend a hand Just listen please and don't retreat Just take it in and stand Prepared to take that simple gift That's given free and clear Because forgiveness knows no rift -- And life is so, so dear!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Soliciting at your age, Grandma!? Well, I don't know whether to be shocked or filled with admiration!. I suppose it could be one way to supplement the old pension!. I can't remember my previous critique apart from reprimanding some-one who hadn't read your poem all the way to the end and then had the cheek to criticise your spelling!. (You know, I'm getting awful (USA) awfully (UK) crabby in my old age!) The longing for Mars grows apace!.!.!.I can feel the impatience in the air!.!.!.a mass evacuation would leave a huge gap here in A!Y though -do you think we'd be allowed a daily commute!?Www@QuestionHome@Com |