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Question: Please comment on this poem!.!?
<>Love<>

Love is the greatest bond,
that holds as strong,
as the stickiest glue!.

For love is what I feel for you,
Of what for my heart it yearns!.
And love for those little things,
You and I do share!.

And for lost times,
the good and the bad!.
And the many nights,
that we could have had!.

Love that holds through the strongest gale,
that rips us from our weakest link,
and hurts from the inside out,
Love that lasts throughout the years!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
really, really good

could you tell me what you think of mine:
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If you are ten years old this is a great poem!. Otherwise it is the work of a ten year old!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

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i love it !.its one that speaks to peopleWww@QuestionHome@Com

Luv it!. But, maybe yo u could and a line like!.!.!.!.!.Love is the letter sealed with a kiss!.!.!.!.!.maybe!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com