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Question: Do you like my poem!?!?!?!? tell me what you think of it please!!!!?
Stare in my reflection in the mist of the river you will not see my face nor a shadow!. The twilight is when I take my flight becoming one in the night!. Natural instincts kick in eyes fall into a deep diery red glow; I feel my soulless, heartless body race faster towards the ulcerous uniamous scent of blood I smell!. Faster I swift from tree to tree grasping at the branches as my hands hit them with the speed of light becoming with the course of fiction of gravity!. Closer and closer I feel my senses grow stronger as I grow nearer to my prey!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.


Pouncing on him I push him, knocking him down against a tree !.!.!. Sinking my teeth into his neck before even having a chance to look into his beautiful face I drink!. Life coming back to my soulless body I drink his away !.!.!. Seeing my venom flow slowly into his veins sparing his now lifeless white body new life as something wild for me to look for in the night!.!.!.!.!.
I kiss his lips a sweet scent of my breath touches the inner braces of his mouth!. A way of me telling him good bye!.!.!.!.!.




Someday I know we will meet again both hunting for the same prey !.!.!.When I see him again his same beautiful face, yet new wild lifeless soul I know I will be stopped in the traces of motion caught in amazement of his gaze!.!.!.!.






His ember eyes will be like a flaming torch to my heart!.!.!.

One that will never burn out and keep glowing like the likeness of the full born night <333 !.!.!.!.!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
could you say "twilight"
lol
i think it is a great poem
p!.s i am a twilight freak :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

is this about twilight!? lol everyone is talking about it, I know nothing about it

but anyways back to your poem
I would say
It is okay, not great but okay
since most lines from your poem are used many times in books and other vamp poems!.!.!.!.!.( twilight is about vamps right!?!? or am i wrong lol)
that is my honest opinionWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.
it's different!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ohh jeez!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

uhhh!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I read it, it is really really vivid Good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com