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Question: How would you continue this!.!.!.or what do you feel!?
Look at this picture:

http://www!.greenpeace!.org/raw/image_full!.!.!.

This is what I got from it:

It’s dark, its cold, I’m standing with only my thoughts at possession; I am alone but I still have everything!. I walk, I wander, I feel the breeze taking over me!. My senses being stimulated!. I’m lost but I feel at home!. The beauty is overwhelming, the deep blue sky breaks, clear drops of rain fall!. Splashing softly onto the hard surfaces, splattering all over the leafy trees, I feel it patter on my cheeks, the wintry draught freshens my skin!. I am drenched, the rain caresses my body!. I hear nature through the thunderous storms, my feet play in the puddles!. I am free…



What changes would you make from the feelings that you get!?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You're writing is simply great! It matches the picture completely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

what i feel from this is that am there in that picture and its not happiness its joy or somethig that is light and hopeful!.!.!.i don't know how you should end it sorryWww@QuestionHome@Com

i wouldn't make any changes!. it'sp erfect!.
it's very scenic place but i wouldn'y want to walk there at night!. boohoo
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Sorry, i didnt feel a thing!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com