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Question: Do you like my first numbered poem!?
It's kinda like a haiku!.!.!. but very very different!.

Don’t you!?
Wish I knew!.
How do I feel!?
Kill my inner self!.
What is beyond this scene!?
Only questions after lines!.
If we stop watching what happens!?
It is just a movie in disguise!.
Does everybody play a part!?
Just the ones with a mask!.
Why do they act as such!?
For their amusement!.
Who’s entertained!?
The others!.
Aren’t you!?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Don’t you!?
Wish I knew!.
How do I feel!?
Forget my true self!.
What is beyond this scene!?
Only questions come to mind!.
If we stop asking what happens!?
We might lose our view of the movie!
Doesn’t everyone play their part!?
Only those who wear a mask!.
Why do they act as such!?
For their amusement!.
Who’s entertained!?
Most, it seems!.
You’re not!?

Hope I didn't butcher it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's extremely original!.!.!.I like how the poem is set up so it follows a pattern of a question and a answer until there is no answer at the end of the poem!. It would be nice to understand what is meant by the first question ( the said question is not that concise but I'm guessing that it builds suspense for the rest of the poem)!. also, the answer for the second question seems fragmented, but that could just be the way that the poem is set up!. I enjoy the way that the lines increase and climax, then decrease thereafter!. Very interesting work, you've done a great job! Www@QuestionHome@Com