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Question: What do you think of this poem I made!?
I'm scared and alone, there's no one else home, It's darker tonight, there's no one in sight, I start to cry, I'm afraid to die, there's a knock at the door, than pain in my core!. I'm scared and alone, there's no one else home, I'm lying on the floor, I'm dead for sure, the door's busted down, than I hear a howl, a wolf comes to me, but I do not flee!. The wolf lies down, there is no sound, he looks in my eyes, than he crys, I pet him freely, he reacts very sweetly!. I'm not scared and alone, now that he's home!.

I Made this poem one day when I was bored, tell me if you like it or not!. ^-^ he he!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
thats some talent right there very insightful,it has a tone to it!.!.!.!.u should publish some like on myspace or something!.join a club or sometihng!.!.!.
it seems kinda emo t first but it ends up being very niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

Well, since you answered mine, I'll answer yours!. It's good!. Yours I think is better than mine!. Well, at least you got more feedback so far!. For a 13 year old, that's really good!. Keep it up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. I like the idea behind that : Make what you fear a friend, and you got nothing to fear!. That is cool, girl ! A star is earned!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Totally, you're GREAT with poems, your poems are AWESOME! Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have talent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG i love this one to!!!! u have talentWww@QuestionHome@Com