What do you think of my freedom poem?

Question: What do you think of my freedom poem!?

Years!. Testing eyes, hearts!.!.!.
Ostracizing, petaling spaces
Unfilled!. Hoping!.!.!.
With humor, laughter!.!.!.
In valleys' souls, needed
Love!.
Life!.
Boisterous reveling
Every Day, Night!.
Festooned gaeity!. Calm
Release!. Fly, owl wings!
Enjoy! Hearts, eyes!.!.!.
Ever the owls' wisdom!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

And in this wisdom
Chances to become
Certainty in knowledge
Each moment anew
Perfecting the past
Tasting sweet wonderment
Ever so slightly
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!.!.!.and a delightful thingy it is too!.!.!.!.

and as Master Yoda may have written had he been a poet!.!.!.

Forever embracing
Rhythm and
Effervescence in poetry!.
Elys your
Writing sans
Inhibition, surely
Liberates the
Lobal frontiers!.
You ooze
Originality!.
Universally expanding
Brains, hearts and
Emotions with each offering!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am free again
To be that girl
Happy, always in tune
A person who danced
Never missing a beat
Knowing when to stop
Yield,and go
Open to love
Understanding youth!.

Very Late Edit: I like this better upside down now that I have read it twice or thrice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wouldn't have gotten the acrostic part!.!.!. should really stop reading additional details before we read the poem!.!.!. had to look up some words!.!.!. likes the Calm then Release into flight!.!.!. still chewing on how ostracizing fits in!.!.!. its a brain tickler!.!.!. thank you!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is a very free form poetry, but nothing links the ideas into a cognitive poem!. Each is an aspect of freedom, and I am all for freedom being a very free spirit, but I think you need verbs to create a poem!.t
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You write beautifully forever!. Your poetry is free, contained, formed, majestic!. The release is like flying; the joy unbound, festooned with your words and your thoughts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's authentic, if u've faith in urself, i think u shld stick with it cuz i think it's real and authentic!. It's a good attempt , and progressing towards the end i felt freed!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Got up today
Outside I went
Overheated got
Do it every day
Open up my eyes
Never see the same sky
Yesterday no clouds
Orbiting my vision
Unfettered damselflyWww@QuestionHome@Com

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My emotion meter!. How I felt as the subject!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good, needs a few more words just to make a little more sense, it shows that you have experience!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am not free (but I am very reasonable)Www@QuestionHome@Com

You will be free indeed, no, you already are, through poetry!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sly
Owl
Wings
Hover
Atop
Tree!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that descride widely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ah!.!.!.an acrostic thingy!. And you stuck in a bird at the end! How wise!Www@QuestionHome@Com