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Question: My little sister wrote this poem and I think it's very cute!!?
She's 11!. This is what she wrote about the Fall Fair that's coming this weekend:

In the center of town whilst walking one day
I heard a friendly penguin say:
"Gather round one and all
The Fall Fair is here
Let's have a ball!"

I took his advice and went off on my way
So eager to dance
So eager to play!

I played at the raffle,
I rode on the train
I sure am glad that it didn't rain!

I think that's really cute!. What about you!?


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think this is very cute as well!.
Great praise should be given to her,
and encouragement to write more!.

Put this poem in a scrap book, or a picture frame! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's cute, too, and awesome that she's using her creativity!. Tell her to keep up the good work!. Being creative is a great outlet!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

super cute!.!.!.she's actually very talentedWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, very cute!.!.!.BUT she could of had that friendly little penguin get decapitated by a train!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its great, the enthusiasm comes through!. keep encouraging her to write more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well, yes!. It is kind of cute!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's wonderful! Tell her to keep writing poems!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com