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Question: Will you comment on this poem, inspired by Buk!?
The Smitthy
Inspired by Buk
by C!.S!. Scotkin


Out behind an old red barn
a forge, the
fire hot on a high summer
day!. Sweat rolls
off bulging arms shaping iron!.
Into Fire, plunged in Water
beaten with pure
rhythm over and over and over
process raw metal
exquisite sharp blades!.

Apprentices stand silent
to see the magic!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The peal of the hammer
to an untrained ear
tells nothing!.!.!.just rings
but to the master
its the iron's soul
awakeningWww@QuestionHome@Com

sorry to interrupt but what are you asking others if you feel that its great then it is
people have different thoughts and opinions some might like it and some may dislike it so just listen to yourself and see if you are satisfied with it don't waste your time asking a question that only you can answer Www@QuestionHome@Com


Apart from spelling Smithy wrong, I can't fault it!.!.!.!.sorry, sorry, sorry!
This has the beauty of steel - beaten and smoothed until not a single impurity remains and the finished article is worthy to be shown to the world (for the appreciation of those who are able to see !.!.!.hint, hint Umer)Www@QuestionHome@Com

May the forge be with you CS and Buk! Amazing WordSmiths both!
It can be said of you both that your labour and toil produce fine art!.

From butterflies to fireflies to forging fire!.!.!.!.who's turn is it next!? I love this flow-on thing happ'nin here!.!.!.!.!.

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Beautiful!.

A story told with few words!.

Beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

*standing silent*Www@QuestionHome@Com

Under the spreading chestnut tree!.!.!.!.!.!.

I like yours also!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like things forged in fire!. They last--like poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice!.!. and thats alot of work but greatWww@QuestionHome@Com

Im standing back silent!. thank youWww@QuestionHome@Com