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Question: Will you comment on the poem about a phone call!?

Bedtime Call
by C!.S!. Scotkin

I was startled
out of a reverie
looking up a word!.
Your special ringtone
Le nozze di Figaro
our bedtime call!.

I drank your voice
deeply, this thirst
that had built on
the heat of my day!.
“You liked your poem!?”
I asked, teasing…
“Still licking the sugar
off my fingers”, you said!.

Lovers conversation
we spoke little, laughed much
breathing love and silliness
into each others ears, still
moonstruck adolescents
with far sighted eyes!.

“I miss you so much!”
We said in one voice,
“No one ever wrote me a poem before"
your tenor cracked
into bass…


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This made me think of a woman clad in black, half lying half sitting up on a bed in a warm coloured room, sipping a glass of red wine in a formal black dress!.


Sweet nothings have always been spoken into the ears of lovers, whether by phone, or snuggled together in the front seat of a 56 oldsmobile on lover's lane!. Words spoken are for the most part, inconsequential!. The important part is the speaking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not the same sugar frosting that neonman speaks of!? Hm - the plot thickens
(another thought - are you cradle-snatching!?) I'm not saying anything!.!.!.you do whatever makes you happy (said granny smiling indulgently over her glasses)!.!.!.Lovely, lovely poem!.!.!.!.as usual!.
(I drank your voice!.!.!.great)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is it hot in here, or is it just me!.!.!.!.!.!? CS This sizzles (especially V2)! *blush!. Hubba hubba!. Double Hubba Hubba in fact!.

Isn't virtual and telephone love great!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

If this is phone sex, I will sign up! lol Great ending!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That would be the Hotline I assume!?

Always trust your bass instincts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This type of sex triggers Insomnia, because its phoney!.!. That is why I resort to unplugging!. Nice read! Www@QuestionHome@Com

Phone sex!.!.!. if so!.!. its niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

Great!. I see Cherubino on the phone downstairs and the maid listening in!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My tenor gets cracked about once a month!Www@QuestionHome@Com