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Position:Home>Poetry> HELP! Poem need help ?Question: HELP! Poem need help !? ok i left my homework til the dying last few days of the holidays, i need to right a poem, no longer then 20 lines, it has to include - rhyming, personification, a metphor and a simile!.
can anyone please write me one please!.!. your help will be soo helpful!Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: when do you need it by!? what kinda things are you interested in!? what kind of animals specifically or what sports!? do you play any sports ok i have to go but i can help you tomorow at like 3:50 or so centeral just email me at believer125@yahoo!.com or if you can't go on them i can just email you back and forth if that would be helpfulWww@QuestionHome@Com here you go: She walks I stare I look down then I stare I look down then I stare look at her long hair look at her pretty face I can't lower my gaze ok I think I can look away nope I can't lower my gaze she has just the right height she has just the right laugh but I can't lower my gaze she has just the right smile I think it will be a while I'm glad the cat has my tongue I'm glad I don't say much words another sin will be hung I'm glad I have the right nerves I can't lower my gaze she says I'm so serious but she can't see my inside I think I'm focused at work or its my shyness I hide Did I lower my gaze its my feelings I hide my attraction I hide I just can't go for this ride how can I lower my gaze I have enough on my plate that I might get hung for but that's a part of my fate I want to lower my gaze I may control it some more but i will see her again and when she comes through the door i even feel my heart grin and when she calls me my name I feel so happy inside but the reality is she cannot be my wife and this is just how it goes I guess I have to move on yet, I'm depressed and lonely I guess I have to stay strong but you're a beautiful thing I see the things you've been through and you make my bells ring I getting so into you and before this poem ends just let me say a few words i have to say it again you are a beeeeaaaaautifuuuul giiiiiiirl!!! Www@QuestionHome@Com Josh!.!.!.don't panic!. You want to get an EASY "A" and know that you wrote the poem!? (no guilt)!.!.!.then listen carefully, it's going to be one of the easiest things you've ever written!.!.!.I promise: 1!. Although you need some rhyme, not all the lines have to rhyme, so just end each stanza with a couplet (pair of rhymed lines)!.!.!.and the neat part is you can use the same two lines for every stanza! 2!. personification is where you attribute human qualities to an inanimate object!.!.!.like when you say the sun has a grudge against you and is trying to burn your eyes out (just an example)!. 3!. a metaphor is when you say, "my life is pain"!.!.!.or anytime you say one thing "is" another!.!.!.a simile is when you say it "is like" something else, like when you say, "my life is like a nightmare"!.!.!.that's a simile!.!.!.if you said, "my life is a nightmare", that's a metaphor!.!.!.see the difference!? and how easy it is to create either one!? 4!. The poem can't be "more than" 20 lines!.!.!.but it doens't have to be 20 lines!.!.!.so make it 12 lines!.!.!.which means you only need three 4-line stanzas!.!.!.or two 6-line stanzas (remember, the last two lines rhyme, so that's only four other lines per stanza!.!.!.and they "don't" have to all rhyme!. So, find two lines that rhyme first!.!.!.that will be your theme!.!.!.for example, you can say: Don't ask me how, when or why It wasn't me, it was some other guy Now you need two four line stanzas to go before that pair at the end!.!.!.something that sounds like you're making an excuse or telling about something that happened!.!.!.like There I was, an innocent little lamb (metaphor) When she started complaining about her hair She said I pulled it or put something in it But she's lying, I tell you, I wasn't even there Don't ask me how, when or why It wasn't me, it was some other guy The window may be broken, but don't look at me I wasn't even here when the breaking went down You say the rock tells you that it came from my hand (personification) But the rock is a liar, it was some other clown Don't ask me how, when or why It wasn't me, it was some other guy Mary Anne, like an angel, was to wait for my call (simile) I'd waited all year and this was my chance But Fate did me wrong and now lucky I'm not (personification) Someone else already asked her to go the dance Don't ask me how, when or why It wasn't me, it was some other guy You don't have to use those lines!.!.!.but I hope it shows you how easy it would be to write the assignment !.!.!.good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com |