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Question: What do you think of!.!.!.!.!.HELP!!?
Hey, i'm Jen, i'm 15 and I am unsure about this short poem i wrote!. i think it sounds weird!.!. and it's made up!.!.!.!. what do you think!?


"Leaving love"

Leaving

Never Coming back

The love for you

I severely lack


It's for the best

You will see

Start life again

But without me


I'm sorry to leave

But you must know

Everything will change

Once I go!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It does not sound wierd at all!. It has come from your heart,soul,and mind, and that is what makes it sound so special!. Write on girl!.Www@QuestionHome@Com