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Question: Judge this poem and give me some tips to improve on it!.!?
Is love preferred when loves not served
is love inferred or is love deserved
is love deferred or does love come first
do we take a test to figure out this mess
so we can make sense
of all the things we placate
or do we test
test ourselves
and create a foundation
so we can find true love in this crazy situation
is love material
or is it unknown
how can one find love
if loves not shown
do i live for the love of it
and hope for the best
or do i pursue love
and hope to build a life from itWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow, i really love it!.
well done =)
I love the meaning behind it
aswell as the way u wrote it
will u please check mine:
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and
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not as good as urs, i don't thinkWww@QuestionHome@Com
It's nice!. Is just a poem or are you going to turn it into a song!.If your not, you should consider it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
WOW!!! that peom just took my breath away!!! it is soooo beautiful!. I think you did a wonderful job!!! you should make it into a song!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Love it!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com