Critique my free verse poem :-) ?

Question: Critique my free verse poem :-) !?

I look toward the sky
Wanting to fly
I have these wings
That I cannot use
I have tried
But have failed
To glide through the clouds
Is my dream
For now I have to learn
And one day
When I’m ready
I will take flight

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Really nice poem!

You should become a writer!.

greets kelly vWww@QuestionHome@Com

it could use more flow!.!.!. or less!.!.!. starts out with a rhyme then abandons the idea!.!.!. might want to break it up into stanzas or thoughts!.!.!. guess thats why its' free verse!.!.!. it also could use a title!.!.!. it is a little awkward to read without punctuation and every line starting with a capital!.!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's great! i really like your thought process!. i think you could probably do more with it, but overall, i think it's beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

pretty good to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

**** i don' t speak englishWww@QuestionHome@Com