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Broken Friendship

it's a mystery in itself
like a puzzle that takes stealth
at times you may never know
who is your friend or foe
to your face they are kind
but turn around theres a change in mind
with a knife in your back
it's self-decency they lack
to other people they talk
about the way you walk
the things you say
or if you dress they wrong way
by them standards are set
it a life they need to get
rumors spead so fast
even if they dont last
it hurts inside
as it demolishes your pride
you start to feel weak
no matter how bleak
it dosent matter
it the friendship they shatter
what you thought you were
you can never be sure
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Its a bit confusing here and there but you can get to the main point of whats it's about!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's not bad!.!.!.I would think about getting new friends as opposed to hanging out with people who pretend to be your friend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com