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What say you to being "Lost at Sea"!?
Lost at Sea
Lost at sea
I plummet its depths
yet the ocean
turns to comfort
as silence enfolds
my eyes take in
lungs take in water
no heaviness I feel
blood turns cold
before death overtakes
your presence I see
strong arms pull me near
we felt so free
both lost at sea
our lips meet
I never feared
you'd not leave me
to drift alone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Was that a rescue, or was it the kiss of death!? A rescue by a friend or lover, or were you joined in death!? Are you drifting toward safety, or toward your demise!?
Very powerful stuff!.
The sea as metaphor for death!? A last-minute rescue by a friend or lover!? Very descriptive!.
I don't view the sea that way!. I have been at sea in storms!. Living on an Island I have experienced several hurricanes (LA is not the only place to suffer from hurricanes)!. Yet, I have never been afraid!. I know the power of the ocean, but come to it as a comfort, almost a friend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sunset and evening star,
And one clear call for me!
And may there be no moaning of the bar,
When I put out to sea,
But such a tide as moving seems asleep,
Too full for sound and foam,
When that which drew from out the boundless deep
Turns again home!.
Twilight and evening bell,
And after that the dark!
And may there be no sadness of farewell,
When I embark;
For tho' from out our bourne of Time and Place
The flood may bear me far,
I hope to see my Pilot face to face
When I have crossed the bar!. ~ TennysenWww@QuestionHome@Com
Another winner here!. The symbolism is exactly right for the subject!.!.!.it lends itself so well to the idea of being alone, drowning in a sea of sorrows and then finding some-one to share your life with you!.!.!.I like the idea that your saviour joins you, rather than splashing up, rescuing you and pulling you onto the beach!.!.!.!.which is what some macho male might think you need!. (sorry, guys - I love you all, really I do)Www@QuestionHome@Com
It is always nice when Tom Hanks shows up and splashes around while he gives you a kiss or is this a different plot!? lol Nice imagery and the poem leaves a lot of room for multiple meanings!. Well done!. Now tell me where Darryl Hannah went!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The imagery is nice - lots of description!.
It's a little bit of an overdone idea, but I like it a lot the way you wrote it!.
Sounds old world like a sea captains widow might have written it or something!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love your poetry!.!.!.!.!.
but I work with the sea, and your poem describes in precise detail my fears!.
So!.!.!.!.!.fantastic words, that hit the spot!.!.!.!.!.
But for this man, a little too close to home!.
Hope you will understand and forgive me!.!.!.!.;o)Www@QuestionHome@Com
vivid!.You've turned what should have been a cold and desolate passing into the warm welcome embrace of a returning lover !.skillfully!. I do like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Answer kiss to the feet of the master story teller!. Oops, forgot, not feet!. Mistress isn't kinky!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I have been lost in my own world for many years so the sea aint too much of a problem !.!.hheeheeeWww@QuestionHome@Com
Very nice rescue!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very Deep!.!.!. As the Sea!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
And the sailors say!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
it is good to know that love is still strong even in the oceanWww@QuestionHome@Com
love this; it's awesome!Www@QuestionHome@Com
So sad!.!.!.!.love finally found and then they drowned!.!.!. Like Romie O
and Julie ett!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
thats a hell of a time to be making outWww@QuestionHome@Com