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Question: Is this a good poem or just an average poem!?

Square'n de oye! Oye to the land o 'de Free man!
Forn which yourn journey hath ended, pardon dein sandenburg!

Into the nighte sorcerer, eagle crest sorcerer, outcall the land,
precious night creature,
outlandish skill set, amoung the very best nay sayers,
yea or nay asked the wombat,
find a village de la truschelle, le pierre goulden fraunzeche!.

Oje, leime, let, let lemme ponder a tought or thrice thought,
for your neighbor is a sandbag of lust!.

Pardon me, whilst I go find my waste paper basket!.

- Holdenburg 1992Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's a superb poem; although I'm a bit nervous about the word economy/flow in the latter portion of the second stanza, it's brilliant, highly abstract work, this cannot be denied!. There were elements of Tennyson in it, I know this is true no matter how diligently the author tried to hide, I know this to be a truth and not a falsehood!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's very hard to understand, but it all depends on perception!. Some people may see it as average, but there will always be those who thinks it is the best or worst poem they've ever heard or read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think Ali G rapped that aloud once!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pretty sure it's a crappy poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's going nowhere!. But thanks anyway for the two points!.
Have you any more like that!?Www@QuestionHome@Com