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Question: What images come to mind when you read this poem!?
what images come to mind when you read this poem such as people, objects, scenery, time-period etc!.


The Child Who Walks Backwards

My next-door neighbor tells me
her child runs into things!.
Cupboard corners and doorknobs
have pounded their shapes
into his face!. She says
he is bothered by dreams,
rises in sleep from his bed
to steal through the halls
and plummet like a wounded bird
down the flight of stairs!.

This child who climbed my maple
with the sureness of a cat,
trips in his room, cracks
his skull on the bedpost,
smacks his cheeks on the floor!.
When I ask about the burns
on the back of his knee,
his mother tells me
he walks backwards
into fireplace grates
or sits and stares at flames
while sparks burn stars in his skin!.

Other children write their names
on the casts that hold
his small bones!.
His mother tells me
he runs into things
walks backwards
breaks his leg
while she lies
sleeping!.


I wrote the poem by the way so its not "homework" question!.!. im just curious if this poem is a good one!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
nice poem, makes me wanna kick somebody's ***!. I hate people who beat up on kids

Dont change words!.!.!.while she lies sleeping!.!.!.is perfect b/c she is lying about situation and sleeping on the fact that child abuse should be addressed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The information tends to lead, but there is no destination!. The way the prose is broken up needs work!. Either set a pentameter, or set each sentence as a stanza!.

If your punch was the "While she lay sleeping" then it might work best to set this as the final line of each stanza to drive it home!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

its reli gd it kind of makes me think child abuse cause hes always hurt and his mother makes excuses - if dat makes sence lol Www@QuestionHome@Com