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Question: Do you like a poem!? Tell me the truth!!!!?
Look in the mirror of shadderd glass!.See not a person but a mask!.A mask apon a face that use to be pretty!.Ti'll it went insaine and out to cause pain!.Rain runs down the sky!.A knife she carrys tonight!.The dim setting sun shines dim not bright!.Plotting revenge was something she must do!.To all the peaple who betray you!.She murderd but when she dose this awful sin!.She really dose cringe!.But noone can tell!.Maybe an evil spell!.The mask has a fake smile painted right over!.So now when she murders she's really always!.!.!.Smiling!.




This means alot to me and 5 stars best ansswer!!!^_^ And tell me what you think of it!^_^ :) *_* &_&
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That's really great!! I suggest you should use spell check, and use the word Vengeance in it!. =]
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you sound like a nut and you need to get help like go to church or a doctor or even a friend but not a healthy mind ,people who are close to you better look out and i will pray for grace and mercy to fill your heart and that puts his hedge of protection around you and your family and friends be blessed and get the help you need Www@QuestionHome@Com

Smile!.!.!.

By mirror

With my shadow

At your mind!.!.!.!?

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"Shadderd" is not a word!. Write poems in a language that you feel comfortable in!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think that this poam is pretty good so i am going to give you 4 stars!.

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If you want to be serious and make this a real poem you have to do things like use spell check or re-read it yourself as a critic!. The format isn't poetic, it's a paragraph!. So if you want it to be a poem it should first look like one!. I fixed a bunch of it and changed some!. But at least it looks like a poem now!. Good luck and don't kill me, please!.

Look in the mirror of shattererd glass
See not a person but a mask
A mask upon a face that used to be vain
Ti'll it went insane and out to cause pain
Rain runs red down the sky
A knife she carries tonight
The setting sun shines only a dim light
Plotting revenge,
two wrongs would make a right
To all the peaple who betrayed
She murdered, hated, committed sin
Her soul began to cringe
But nobody can tell
Maybe an evil spell
Has painted evil upon her face
So now when she murders!.!.!.
She's smiling on the outside,
But inside she still hurts!.
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