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Question: It's been a while my friend!.opinions please!?
this is my 7th poem i call it; Its been a while!.tell me what you think of it!. also, tell me who you think the "friend" is that I am talking about!.kudos if you figure it out

Its been a while my friend,
since you've made a turn toward me again
It's been a while my friend, since you gave me the sweetness of your lips
its been a while my friend,
since you made my life worth feeling
How long will you stay this time
my friend
Should I give you the extra room in the back to stay!?
Should I waste my time one you once again my friend!?
answer me now or forever hold your peace!
I should be screaming that at you my friend
But you have changed
Maybe you haven't realized yet
my friend
but I too have changed
And I'll be the one to let you go this time
my friend
You'll forever stay in my soul
and I want to forever stay in yours as well
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I would say you are speaking about an x lover or perhaps an x spouse!.

Today I find myself walking through empty rooms
walking aimlessly while the walls whisper your name
Every window, every mirror I pass
shows not my reflection, but visions of your face
in an effort to remind me what I had
and lost!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Could be your shadow!.!.!.but only The Shadow Knows!. (Little in-joke there!. Don't worry if you don't get it!.)

The repetition of 'my friend' is slightly tedious!. I'd work on that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

great!. 10/10
hope everything works out!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are talking about your lover!.Www@QuestionHome@Com