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Question: What say you about this "Morning Awareness"!?
Morning Awareness

Here in the mountains
7000 feet high
Crisp cool morning
My coffee and I
Sat on my porch
To greet the morn
Watched the sun's light
Break through tall arms
Of trees surrounding
this place I call home
My mind awakens
Thoughts fall into place
I begin to ponder
Their wonderful grace
They don't ask for much
Just some water and sun
Patience they show
As they grown day by day
A place of shelter
For fowl they provide
Branches reach out
Cool shade they offer
Against harsh sun
Strong and proud
Storms they weather
May bend from the wind
But rooted remain
Hundreds of years
Their lifespan includes
What keeps them going
I wanted to know
The answer came
From soft whisper I knew
It's because they begin
Each and every new day
Reaching in faith
toward the heavens above!.


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i love this poem! i feel that way exactly!. this week has been terrible for me cause the city has cut down the big old fir trees in front of our home to put in a sidewalk!. i loved those trees, and i sat here with tears in my eyes as they came down!. i'm sure i heard them weeping as well!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Chop it down!.!.!.!.!.the poem, that is!.!.!.or better still set it out differently

Here in the mountains 7000 feet high
Crisp cool morning, my coffee and I!.
Sat on my porch to greet the morn
Watched the sun's light break though tall arms
Of trees, surrounding this place I call home
!.!.!.!.to me, it seems more comfortable on the page, and stops me reading it in a choppy, sing-song fashion!.

(Much, much better than t'other one)

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That reminds me of a trip I went on when I was growing up!. We went to visit my step mother's aunt who lived in a cabin on the Nu river up in the mountains!. She had a poodle!. We went canoing and we picked muskadines on the river side!. That is a very nice poem!.It makes me want to go to the mountains and I feel like I am there and I enjoyed it!. ThanksWww@QuestionHome@Com

Such a lovely, uplifting poem!. Just this morning I was out watching the sun come up!. It was a spiritual experience in ways that are captured in the beauty of your words!. You bring to the page something almost inexpressible!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

what a pretty way to wake up!. a tree can do a lot of things that help the earth!. we need to look at them with a thought of peace!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is lovely!.!.!.I think this morning awareness is a gift from the universe "Ah today is going to be a good day"Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very Pretty,i can almost imagine the trees swayingWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think there are trees, that would like to be like you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think that I shall never see a poem lovely as a tree -but this one was quite nice, ma!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

God's creations are lovely, and so is this poem!
Good morning ma!Www@QuestionHome@Com

If you want to be a tree will you be branching out i wonder!?
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Wonderful again my girl!. You are a poet!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com