Question Home

Position:Home>Poetry> A poem that asks of Mercy?


Question: A poem that asks of Mercy!?
Have Mercy On Me
By S!. F!. Reborn

My tongue was parched!.
Once an instrument that played profanity,
It seeks a new sheet of music!.
One written with ink, dripping compassion,
Like unto the heart of Christ!.
The heart beat of all, in one accord!.
In time with the Eternal God,
Our Elohim, El Shaddai!.
Having sought grace, receiving an abundance,
I am thankful the He would
Have mercy on me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This reads like a psalm, my friend!.
Well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful!.

There is one line with a typo
I am thankful the He would <-- the should be that

This poem touches my heart, soul, the song in the air I breathe!.
The beginning is powerful!. It reminds us that no matter how good we are, we are not perfect and only by the grace of the Lord are we saved!.

T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your spirit is much closer to God than most!.
Beautiful, Semper!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautifully said, like a prayer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was awesome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is really well written Semper!.!.!.!.!.I love it!.!.!.it so good and touching!. God shall surely have an ear for this!. Amen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great! A poem and a prayer!. Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

King David could not have written more purely a plea!.
Touched me deeply!. Amen

maWww@QuestionHome@Com

Your soul has not far to go my friend!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is good I can personally relate to this I'm still a work in progressWww@QuestionHome@Com