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Question: A poem that asks of Mercy!?
Have Mercy On Me
By S!. F!. Reborn
My tongue was parched!.
Once an instrument that played profanity,
It seeks a new sheet of music!.
One written with ink, dripping compassion,
Like unto the heart of Christ!.
The heart beat of all, in one accord!.
In time with the Eternal God,
Our Elohim, El Shaddai!.
Having sought grace, receiving an abundance,
I am thankful the He would
Have mercy on me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This reads like a psalm, my friend!.
Well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful!.
There is one line with a typo
I am thankful the He would <-- the should be that
This poem touches my heart, soul, the song in the air I breathe!.
The beginning is powerful!. It reminds us that no matter how good we are, we are not perfect and only by the grace of the Lord are we saved!.
T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your spirit is much closer to God than most!.
Beautiful, Semper!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautifully said, like a prayer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That was awesome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is really well written Semper!.!.!.!.!.I love it!.!.!.it so good and touching!. God shall surely have an ear for this!. Amen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great! A poem and a prayer!. Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
King David could not have written more purely a plea!.
Touched me deeply!. Amen
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Your soul has not far to go my friend!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
this is good I can personally relate to this I'm still a work in progressWww@QuestionHome@Com