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Question: What do you think of this poem!? NO MEAN ANSWERS PLEASE!?
When I grow up I want to be a crayon,
May I be a different colour on every day,
And be able to say,
I have the power to bring joy,
To the many children of the world,
Can I colour in their day!?,
Can I take away their black and white shades!?
May I be a colour of the rainbow,
And the many other colours we can find in the world,
To continue my journey without being looked down upon,
Like a little girl,
To bring pictures to life,
On special occasions,
To see to see adults faces light up with these creations,
For it is impossible for them to realize such young children have these imaginations,
Pink, purple, blue and brown,
I wish to turn all those frowns,
Of those unhappy children upside down,
To bring the smile on someone's face,
Without looking like a disgrace,
Do you have the faith!?,
To let me be a crayon someday!?,
Someday I want to turn the colours of the world into the best,
I give you my word for you will receive nothing more, nothing less!.

Written by Keen PoetWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A warm hearted and thoughtful concept, it made me smile!. You coloured in a bit of my day, thank you!.

I could see this as a poster on the wall with the words Benetton in the bottom right hand corner!. Send it to them and see what they think!. Or possibly Staedler (Pencil manufacturer)!.

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I don`t think it is a poem as such ,but the ideas within what you have wrote !.Try to work on it a bit more in a few months ,keep going back to it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

a bit unorganized!.!.idkWww@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds like a Michael Jackson hit single!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it
its cute
good job
xxxWww@QuestionHome@Com

uhm
keep trying!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Really cute but I'd say u can edit it a lil!. The theme is so cute!. Keep on writing!. U have the talent!Www@QuestionHome@Com