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Question: What say you of an insipid ramble!?
Scraping skin from scalp
I lean towards the curtain
a dog's shadow nose gets
curios and moves in silence
towards the steam!.
I am struck numb by
indifference and lather
coaxing clean the dirt
of the day!.
The dog knows everything
and waits for nothing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Non-insipid!
Beauty is the the eye of the buttholder!.!.!.
"!.!.!.shadow nose!.!.!." and "!.!.!.struck numb!.!.!." are the binding chords of this poem!. Their strengths hold the ramblings together, preserving continuity!.
Just my opinion!.
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I say it was a great way to start my day!.
The smaller black one BJ, will always wait until you're in the shower, and if the door was left open in the slightest, he creeps in!. If you spot his shadow okay, but if your eyes are closed from soap!.!.when he sticks his nose past the shower curtain!.!.!.
a cold jolt in the!.!.!.umm!.!.!. nether regions can be a tad surprising!. To both parties!. The dog does not like high pitched screams!.!.!.go figure!.
Of course, he doesn't want to get in, he just wants to try and catch the spraying water!.!. if I could ever tape him, it would be worth posting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
He read your earlier poem of being afraid of the shower,
he was just there to comfort and protect!.
I liked "coaxing clean the dirt of the day" metaphor, symbolic, or literal, it's good!
Morning!
maWww@QuestionHome@Com
Is your dog a taxidermist!? !.!.!.or perhaps just 'Psycho'
My dog uses her nose to bring me curios but there the similarity fades for she knows nothing and waits for everythingWww@QuestionHome@Com
Indeed! yep, title is worthy of twelve different readings which all say the same!.!.!.did I say that!?
No, I never said that!.!.!.
Dirt of the day is a way good feeling!.!.!.when it is gone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your insipid ramblings are better than my final products!Www@QuestionHome@Com
What ramble!? I understood every bit of it!. Beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
One of my dogs runs from the bathroom door,the other would happily jump right in,no waiting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Interesting story and it's not rambling!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Only the nose knows!Www@QuestionHome@Com
The dog is waiting for breakfast!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Ingenious, you are shaving and dog looks on!. Probably with a gleam in it's eye!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com
My mom showers with her dogWww@QuestionHome@Com
perhaps waits for you to be in the shower
to get into trouble that you won't see
until it's too lateWww@QuestionHome@Com
the dog just lives for the moment, and nothing lessWww@QuestionHome@Com
I don't trust cats!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Did you finally take a bath!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like anything that has to do with dogs (or cats)Www@QuestionHome@Com
or waits for a biscuit which is what my dog would be doingWww@QuestionHome@Com
It's a bit insipid and rambling!. And 'curios' is spelt 'curious'!.Www@QuestionHome@Com