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Position:Home>Poetry> Have you ever felt like swooning with unashamed ecstasy?Question: Have you ever felt like swooning with unashamed ecstasy!? The most beautiful girl in the world Her soft lips gently moved along the side of my cheek, Like that of a puppy seeking the tiny teat on the belly of It’s mother!. Her sweet breath warmed my ear as the seeking lips found My ear lobe and ever so gently pulled on it sending Unimagined thrills of delight down my spine!. Never had Female’s lips affected me in this way before!. Her breath Came out long and warm which caused me to tuck my Neck into my shoulders for the thrill was so overpowering, No longer could I stand it without swooning with pure Unashamed, unadulterated ecstasy!. I drew away from her and took her face in my hands and Looked into her brown eyes!. I could see my reflection as If it were looking back at me from beneath the surface of Limpid water!. Her eyelashes were long and curled gracefully Upwards and I could see everyone of them from there base to There fine pointed tips!. She was the most beautiful thing I Had ever seen and oh how I loved her!. I gently pulled her head forward and placed a long kiss upon Her forehead, then whispered into her ear, “Lovely Lady, the Bookies have you at 10 to 1 at the moment don’t let me down Will you”!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: And we're off!.!.!.!.its captivating in the lead, mesmerized at the turn and coming down the stretch, it's outstanding!. At the finish line, it's hilarious from some prose!.!.!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Man!.!.!.!.!.You got me! Hahaha! Now, is there an alternate version!? You painted 2 very lovely, VERY different pictures with this one!. Fantastic reading!Www@QuestionHome@Com I knew that those big brown eyes were not of a human variety!.!. LOL I have seen them before myself!.!.!. Lovely poem , indeed!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well! This poetry really put a shame on my "Eulogy For A Beloved"!.!.!.!.don't know how you do it, but smiles are much, much welcome!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Robert! You got me right to the end! Very chucklingly funny!Www@QuestionHome@Com Best laugh I have had to-day!.Enjoyed Enjoyed!.You had me right from the start!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I thought it was going to be your dog, but a horse will do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Now that's some mighty fine writing! Pulitzer worthy!Www@QuestionHome@Com I love it! You had me going there all the way to the end!. Reminds me of someone I know!. nfd?Www@QuestionHome@Com i feel envious i was not that fillyWww@QuestionHome@Com My unashamed self for a second thought that this wonderful piece was written for me! lol =)Www@QuestionHome@Com hmm!.!.!. i really liked this!.!. however!.!.!. it could be worded a bit differently in a few placesWww@QuestionHome@Com Up until the end, all I could think was, does she have a sister!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Rolling on the floor laughing, my money is on Lovely Lady!Www@QuestionHome@Com |