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Jupiter Rising

The hush and morning dew
Slowly bringing in
A hazy new dawn

The morning rides
Its way through
My bedroom window
And gently whispers

Then Jupiter rises
Jumps on the bed
Nudges my head
It's time to be fed

*Jupe is one of my Border Collies

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This has very nice, spritely images!. I am not sure that introducing that kind of rhyme into the last three lines really works!. But that's just me!. Very good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is a cute poem =]Www@QuestionHome@Com