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The hush and morning dew Envelop Slowly bringing in A hazy new dawn Gradually The morning rides Its way through My bedroom window And gently whispers wooooossssshhhhhhh Then Jupiter rises Jumps on the bed Nudges my head It's time to be fed *Jupe is one of my Border Collies Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This has very nice, spritely images!. I am not sure that introducing that kind of rhyme into the last three lines really works!. But that's just me!. Very good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com this is a cute poem =]Www@QuestionHome@Com |