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A Thank You Note To Buk
by C!.S!. Scotkin

New mown hay
Straw in my hair
Pounding rhythms
Feet reeling with joy
Fiddlers replace
their sweat with shine,
harvest table heaped,
food and love,
surrounded by friends
all forgetting
and my skirt


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's stunning; beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Twas a great shindig!. All had fun, but to be honest CS, twirling wasn't actually what your skirt kept doing, it was more like sailing or flying, and between watching your suntanned thighs and Elaine in her skintight jeans,
"I could have danced all night"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A lovely thank you to Buk!. He's such a good host!
I got in late and missed most of the fun, but cleaning up this morning I was able to see a good time was had by all!

*Ma: Account suspended!? When!? Why!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Absolutely brilliant!. There is nothing better than a poem as a 'thank you' gift!.!.!.!.I wish I'd been there!.!.!.he obviously feels that an old granny should not feature in his dreams, he doesn't realise what an ace mover and shaker I am!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes!. i am sure he will "get it"!. Buk loves for people to have fun!. forgetting self-consciousness will really make him happy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I was a wonderful dance and your note is certainly appropriate!. The first barn dance I have ever attended! (I was on a hayride once--that was fun)!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You little minx with straw in your hair, I bet that skirt was wrinkled as well; twas a nice good morning poem!.!.!. btw!.!.!. always bring a quilt to the hay loft!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful!.!.!.!.and MUCH more appropriate than was
getting his account suspended!.



You little minx!!! Straw in your hair and twirling to the dance!.!.!.oh, but YES!!! Buk will indeed love this!!!
Good and better as she goes!!!

Sorry, Bob!! I didn't even see your answer when I wrote mine!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It works for me!.!.
I am still picking straw out of my hair!.!.best time I have had in a LONG time!.!. woo hoo!

Thanks Buk!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Explain to me again why I was never invited to any of Buk's party!? Www@QuestionHome@Com


How sweet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wonderful thank you to a wonderful time!. don't ask me how many stars there are!.!.!.i lost countWww@QuestionHome@Com

I dont see no thank you what so ever!.!.!.!.I don't even get it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'll pass!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Quite nice!.

I sent my Thanks last evening with a pkg of sausages!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thank-you for being our spokesperson!. It was a great time!. Www@QuestionHome@Com