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Question: What do you think of this poems I wrote!?
Im 15 and wrote this pretty recently!.

A Black Rose Story

When you let lifes lies set you free, you've felt its beauty!. Like a Black Rose tells its stories, you already know them!. Like a black line that lay upon it, it tells of its suffering!. Its dew still laying on its petal, your weeping from sorrow!. Its thorns tell of its fight to resist, but it knows death blooms, like eclispe!. Its mere difference, it lays outspoken from the outside, well we keep it on the inside, its to bad!. Like a Black Rose, I only exist, but to those who have felt lifes beauty!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it, it's unusual and has a goodstructure making it all stay together well!. i really like it!. keep writing!.

thanks for sharing it!.

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umm pretty niceWww@QuestionHome@Com