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Question: Poem plz tell me ways to make it better i dont like it!?
It is noticed every day
it is wanted every day
It is appreciated everyday
It is love

It is wished every day
It is trying to break through every day
It is stronger every day
It is peace

It is enjoyed every day
It is passed on everyday
It is a single smile
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I don't know, I think its great in my opinion, I like how the meaning is clear, and it is definitely optimistic and uplifting!. Maybe you can use some other words so you don't have to repeat 'It is' !? Just a suggestion, but do whatever you feel would work!. You're a great writer, believe that you are!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Poetry is not open discussion, its inner beauty should more
attractive then outer structure, poetry always telling indirect
than direct approach, here by you are telling a lots as you
cementing by words, lets try always tomorrow is brighter
than today, next is better than this!. no stop innovation,
moni-huq!.dhaka!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love the simplicity and creativeness of your poem!. I just feel that you repeat "every day" too much!. Its still goodWww@QuestionHome@Com