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Question: Thoes this poem suck!?
Standing behind those locked doors that only a key can open
Lying under six feet of dirt that only a shovel can dig
On top of a hole standing is a soul that can fill in
All u need is a mixture of talent and passion
To take that sip only hard working hands can open that bottle
To gulp it down is a clean throat that can swallow
A good breath to run and follow
Those dreams that keep escaping away and away
Out of sight and out of reach
All you need, are those eyes that keep themselves on the road
Regardless of what it is surrounded and what it sees
A mind that can tell the difference between a road that goes to a ditch and a road that can rich
To the dreams that you dream every night that lies inside those dark clouds
And all you need is a needle to burst those clouds and set your dreams free as they rain over you

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
no way!
to me the message was sort of like your dreams are at your hands but you know whether to follow them or not!?

but yea im no poet but i deffinetly like this one alot ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love the ending!. I think its really good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com



that's pretty cool :D i like how it endedWww@QuestionHome@Com