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Question: Does the song inside this poem do anything for you!?

On a midnight walk,
Down a moonlit pier,
a creature from the sea,

He says, “Hey man can
you give me a light!?”
What a peculiar sight…

I says, “Fish, I quit,
Smoking sea weed,
But still,
You’re standing here
with me,”

Fish to fish, out in the air,
It would be safer in the water,

So, I step inside, to hide,
From the big pink fish,
At the end of the pier,
With a cigar and beer,

Lobster red, lemon yellow,
Clarified butter, austere,
“Can he be…

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is an example of humorous poetry without silliness or nonsense!. It is the type of humor book publishers seek!. Talent and thought are necessary to create humorous adult poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry, TD!.!.!.doesn't do a thing for me!.
Someone said, sounds like October!.!.!.well, I'm a coastal gal living in the mountains now!.!.!.and it speaks of neither fall/ location, except in superficial generalities!.
I usually like your pieces!.!.!.not this one!. But remember, I'm only speaking for myself and not for the merit of the piece!.
I don't find it humorous, either!. To the contrary, I find it on the boring side!.
You asked!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love this piece TD!.!.!.i love the dialogues!.!.!.the images and the sounds!. but my little brain is yet to trace the intellectual secrets hidden in this piece!. the song inside this poem surely inspires me to think!. But even without the toils of brain, there is great delight in reading this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No, the poem and the "song" inside it did absolutely nothing for me!. Should I feel sorry for this, that I don't approve of another of your brilliant works!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Poached, baked or fried with lemon butter and tartar sauce!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like October!.

I love the rhythm of this piece!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I remember this from the first time around!.!.!.!.I think!.
Still makes me smile!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I ditto Silver Bells on this one!