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I wrote this new poem!? !?
the night we parted
it was mere movements
shallow words, dry tears
would you care to disagree!?
we parted years ago, truth is
every tear shed was another reason
every cold-hearted look was another goodbye
our farewell was painful
our farewell was long ago
i used to feel you in my being
but now it's just a stranger i see
would you dare to blame me
or should i be the accuser
maybe the words unsaid
were kept too long
and now let us be
our eyes are silent
the doors are finally shut
i know i'm not too good!.!.!.i'm a beginner but still please comment
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It's really good!. It made me think of someone from my past!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
very gooood :]
keep it up
check out my own work:
I think that poem is pretty good for a beginner!. I try to write poems but im not that good at it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Don't post your unpublished work on yahoo answers!. Anyone can copy and paste that and claim it's their own work!.
Good job, nonetheless!. ; )Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow me and my ex both really like the poem, though he had to explain it to me!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's great!. Really deep, did that happen!. Good job and god luck!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like it i really capture your visionWww@QuestionHome@Com
its really goodWww@QuestionHome@Com