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Question: Good title-I'm your shadow!?
I'm a loner a outcast
a one of a kind
but most of all
I'm your shadow
I never fade
Dark as dark can get
do you see me here!?
maybe not
I'm a shadow no on sees
I fade in there eyes
Like your started to do
do we need a spark to make this fly!?
Remember
I'm your shadow
a one of a kind
I never fade
growing stronger every day
make me like you
a friend seen by everyone
not this shadow
I only pretend
to be as strong as
you think I am


~Erika aka (Silent-Rebirth)Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
There's a Lisa Gerrard song called "Sanvean (I am Your Shadow)"!. So no, I wouldn't use it!.

Amazing song, that is, by the way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a reasonably good title, actually!. I like it, even!. But it's too straightforward, not that there's anything wrong with it!.

The word shadow usually develops a sense of fear!. Is that the feeling you want to become the theme in your poem!? Usually, a title is there to describe the topic of the poem in a sort of metaphoric way!. May I suggest one, just one, title!?

Here:

Moon's Nape

The moon's nape, or whatever's behind the moon, actually, is dark, right!? Like a shadow!. Voila!. But it's just a suggestion so please scratch it if you must!.

Hope I helped!. ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just a confirmation of what you already know!. It is the right title!.Www@QuestionHome@Com