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Question: Keep it or kill it!? You decide!!?
I woke up with this in my head!. It is a bit sentimental for me!. I vote quick kill and an unmarked grave!. What do you vote!?
I died, and dying see the truth,
Of all the things I’ve left behind;
For ghosts beyond can better see
Ghosts in another’s living mind!.
I see the face beneath your face,
The crying one behind the smile;
I see your body rock with pain,
Though you sit steady all the while!.
I reach, but can not touch your dress,
I speak the words you can not hear;
My joy to be forever close,
My agony to be this near!.
One day you will descend to me,
As I arise to take your hand,
And leaving all these cares behind,
Will step into an infant land!.!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It didn't do anything for me personally; but if it has meaning for you, don't destroy it right away!. Put it in a drawer and don't look at it for a year!. If it makes you cringe when you read it again, destroy it at that point!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
you need to Keep this!!! its deep in a good way, not cheesy!. I really hope you keep it & Share it somewhere!. Write a small journal of poems like this!. Please don't kill it, its wonderful & it could help people get through some hard deaths: DWww@QuestionHome@Com
oh definately keep it!
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I'd say keep it!.!.!.It has a deeper context than most can see, don't let others opinions take that away from you!. Thanks for sharingWww@QuestionHome@Com
i kinda like it!. keep it!. maybe youll like it later!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
kill it i'm not into sentimental poetry like thisWww@QuestionHome@Com
I really liked it, it's VERY good, honestly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Keep it =]
Beautiful poem!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Please keep it - and share it!Www@QuestionHome@Com
why would you kill it!.!.!?
that was awesome!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
kill itWww@QuestionHome@Com
Needs a bit of polishing, but shows promise!. Here's a suggestion or two to play with!.!.!.feel free to disregard!.
I died, and in death saw the truth
of all the things I'd left behind;
for ghosts beyond can better see
the 'ghosts' which haunt a living mind!.
I saw the face beneath your face,
the crying one behind the smile;
I saw your body rock with pain,
though you sat steady all the while!.
I reached, but could not touch your dress,
I spoke the words you could not hear;
It was a joy to be so close,
an agony to be so near!.
One day you will descend to me,
as I arise to take your hand -
and leaving all your cares behind
we'll step into a better land!.Www@QuestionHome@Com