Are you being watched?

Question: Are you being watched!?

Flash freeze
Brain frozen in time
This beat goes on

Thump - thump
Thump - thump

Alive in my living
Guiding my giving
Double shots to go down
Love on the rocks
Drowning in it

Cupid cracking up
Eros looking down
On me they shine
Remember to remind
Smile, somebodies watching

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Maybe it's Harper that needs to take a course since "he" has no idea what "he" is talking about!. Poetry and writing in general can be very personal and at the same time relateable!. also, funny how someone comes in and says it isn't good and seconds later Iano shows up!. I am sure that was just a coincidence!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very interesting, I suppose we all feel we're being watched at times!.
Now for the real question: what is in that little box - that yellow thing called your avatar!? I can't even make it out with a magnifying glass!. Something to do with water, I'm sure!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Iunno!. Take a writer's craft course, study other poetry,
it seems to me that all you have is a message that's meaningful to you!. Not to me, or to anyone else who reads it!. So the only person this poem clicks with is you!.
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I happen to like this,,,,, Remember,,,THERE IS ALWAYS SOMEONE WATCHING ,,,,

Remember,,,,,Catcher in the rye!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

What you've written is exactly why I prefer Like over Love!.

Just another "impersonal" reply :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

If someones watching me I hope they like what they see!.
He he he!.!.!.
A good mind
Is hard to find!.
I found yours!.
Now I want more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes by two eyes staring back at me called hydropro!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I know you're right this time!. You made me feel better!. I really needed that!. Can't explain!.Thanks for being here today!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not a bad poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

He's right you know!. Your poems are all incredibly self-obsessed, about you, you, you!. Try writing about something outside of yourself!.!.!.just for a change!.Www@QuestionHome@Com