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Question: Is this a good poem I wrote!?
Who am I!.!.!.!.!.!?
Where do I want to go!.!.!.!.!?
What do I really think of life!.!.!.!?
What are some of the things I know!.!.!.!.!?
What are all of the deeds I've done!.!.!.!.,
Are they as cold as snow!.!.!.!?
Do I lift many heatrs or throw them dowm and give them a fatal blow!.!.!.!.!?
Where will I be five years from now!.!.!.!.,
Do I have any hope!?
Is it really knowledge I want or do I want my wealth to grow!?
And all that I've know and did!.!.did I do it all for show!?
Is there really someone out there!.!.that will help me stay afloat!.!.!?
If so then where is she!.!.!.!?I've looked on many boats!.!.!.
Oh That Someone I need your help!.!.I don't know where I will go!.!.!.!?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I love it!. you went against the grain on somethings, and when you reverted back to the "normal" style, you did it flawlesly!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

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