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Question: What do you think of my haiku's!?
AUTUMN
Golden foliage falls
Dancing, twirling, blue ballet
Sad, chattering wind

WINTER IDLE
Prowling wolf, ice cold
Hunger melts under his clothes
Bread lays before him

Shugofa Danesh
9/21/08
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
They are both very evocative and I like them, especially "Autumn"
However, to be pedantic, why the apostrophe in haikus, does foliage have only two syllables, and when at school I was taught that chickens lay eggs !! Sorry!! But I do like the!.!."twirling, blue ballet" !! Www@QuestionHome@Com

very nice, but I'm not sure why the ballet is blue!. Otherwise, very good images!.Www@QuestionHome@Com