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Imprisoned Emotions

Feelings of a girl
Feelings that are kept confined in her mind
Each day she faces her feelings
With all the pressure, her feelings grow like a person
She wants to let it out but its a mission
whens he tries she slips
when she tries she falls
because she cannot get on top of her words
confused and confined
Locked away because of her excessive emotions
She hopes to share it soon
Before its way too late!.


YOU GUYS CAN READ MY POEM THAT I WROTE
AND PLEASE SHARE YOUR IDEAS, CHANGES, THOUGHTS, & UNDERSTANDING ABOUT IT!.

THANK YOU!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I thought it was very good, I'm an aspiring writer myself!. I wouldn't really change anything, keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice and meaning ful!. You can add rythmsWww@QuestionHome@Com