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Question: Does this poem reflect how you sometimes feel!?
All Ready and Waiting

Cleared out my schedule
for a fun-filled day!.
Table is set, hope my friends
find their way!.

I need questions to answer
and poems to review!.
Yet, here I sit,
just waiting for you!

Turn on those computers
let the games begin!.
I'm longing to hug
my internet kin!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
If I continue to play
as I've done today
Yahoo will send
violations my way!.
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Listen, Ma - we are at last getting a Summer over here in rain-soaked UK!. Now, would you sit at a computer looking out at the sunshine, or do what I've been doing to-day!.!.!.!.Husband, Daughter, Daughter-in-law, dog, two buggies, three boys (aged 4, 3, 2) and Lil'em going for a walk along the canal to the play area!. Said D and D using the swings and giggling like school-girls, the boys running the wrong way up the slides and me just soaking up the fun and the sun!. Back home for mayhem and sandwiches, strawberries and jelly and yoghurt !. Your call!.

I know exactly what you mean though!.!.!.!.what a great pome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Can one feel bored,
Begin to think, ignored
Or is it different
A sort of 'indifferent'
That makes it hard to play
Drives one away!?
When the laughs don't come
Does it mean you're numb,
Or is it you're just tired
No longer inspired
To try and make people laugh
Afraid of making another gaffe!?
Tired of the drama in here
Came for the cheer
Lonely heart was sincere
Now wondering if worthwhile
Seeing far too much hostile!.
Time to move on and seek
That which is less bleak!.
Indifferent or just bored,
Wondering if I've hit a chord!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your poem sounds like you are lonely and reaching out!. I can relate to that!. Now that bad weather is setting in and I'm going to be inside all winter (retired) and can't get out and do my yard work I imagine I'll feel like this frequently!. Fortunately I have two pets and a lot of Sci Fi to read and plenty else to do!. I like to write poetry too!. Best wishes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I couldn't sleep a wink last night,
Haven't a reason why!.
Did all my chores and cooking, too!.
I even baked a pie!.

I, too, am having friends in,
this evening, by and by!.
If I don't take a nap and sleep
I'm really gonna die!.!.!.

So here's a hug to our Sweet Ma,
I promise I will play
when I have slept, tomorrow comes
a soft and new Sunday!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now Ma, you just know
we can never resist,
your sweet gentle presence
whilst playing on this
computer, all hooked up
and wired for fun
but Monks are all fooked up,
and you know that, hun!.
Yet still you will smile
and never berate!.
So hang on for a while,
I'll see you at eight!.

(That's UK time, obviously!.!.lol)

;o)
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What a well rounded upbeat "feel-good" poem is this ! It's like enjoying a good cup of coffee and cinnamon bun!. Really ! The words flow and don't leave you scratching your head but rather help you get ready for the fun to come!. Bravo !Www@QuestionHome@Com

Aww yes reminds me of a good close internet-related family
A bunch of people can relate to you hun, counting me sometimes
good poem

Check out mine if you would like to : http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Mama kin,
Back again!.
Batteries steady!.
Same as Ever - ready!.
Like the Energizer Bunny,
Gee, Ma, your ears look funny!
Just keeps goin' and goin'!.!.!.
And writing her poem!.
Back again,
Mama kin!.



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Wait and sit
Twiddle and knit
Then you're hit
Yea, that's it

Words working you
Images coming through
Sounds show a view
Old made anew

Enjoy the day
Come what may
Here to say
ma's ready to play
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This is lovely ma!.!.!.!.!.!.very sweet and cheerful!. I love it!.!.!.!.!.

and here is jay, the silver bells
back after wars of life
But still my endless miseries reign
And boundless yet my strife!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

(((((MA))))))!!
To answer your question, Yes, sometimes!.
Sorry to say I'll be leaving soon!.!.!.busy day ahead!. Well not really, hair cuts and then a party!! YAY! Www@QuestionHome@Com

You've captured what a lot of us feel!. A table set, the most welcoming sight upon entering a home!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

yup, Ma,, life must be pretty boring for us!.!. I think I need to do some house cleaning but here I sit looking longingly at my computer screen!.!.!. go figure!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Back at ya!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

BIG transatlantic hug,right back at ya! :)
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((((((((MA))))))))Www@QuestionHome@Com

You rock!Www@QuestionHome@Com

well, im tring to come up with some good questions



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that is the saddest poem i've ever read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it ma :)xWww@QuestionHome@Com

i really like, i cant wait to get on the computor either!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

love it !
it perfectly describes the daily routine i have made for myself!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ma you are fab and I have a sermon to write so if you see me it is because I am stuck!.

be wellWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!.!.!.!.and yes!.!.!.!.I do feel that way quite often!.

(((ma)))Www@QuestionHome@Com