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Question: May I please have your thoughts on this!?
I posted this earlier as I wasn't sure of a title, but finally went with a suggested one!.

Today I Found You


All I can see is the way the sun hits your face and hair,
and the way it falls on fields!.
You lean with the grass, bucket against hips
as your feet tread against the wind, hair blown back
into a tuft against your face
as you turn to smile!.
It is richer to imagine colors;
I'm sure the sky was lavender, pink along the horizon,
the grass maybe washed in gold

as the sun set!.
It started at the ends of your hair
and moved in to your cheeks,
worked it's way around
as you became encased in light,
drawn into the sky!.
You were placed in the archives of a past
grandmother, and then left to fade into sepia,
buried by a road map of lines!.

Today I found you
as you fell through a stack of albums,
and placed you back between the stained adhesives and laminated strips!.
Your rusted sunset spilled over you
in a protest against time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Please remember that I have been inside the head of a master, for 6 months!.!.!.

This is pretty good!. I got the 'bucket' stuck in my head because the thing looks out of place there!. All through the rest, I looked for something to put in the bucket, but never got poured on!.!.!.still, very smooth and easy to follow along carrying the empty bucket!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

omg i love it!
in my opinion, to be a good poet, its not about the ryhem or how many words/phrases are in each line, but raither or not you can put a picture in someones minds!.!.!.as this one does!.(for me)
!.!.reminded me of my grandmother who past when i was 8(im now 17)
very nice!!

keep up the good work =}

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Always, you garnish the picture more than adequately bringing life to an album cover that was nothing special until you touched it!.!.

Thank you for sharing, you have a marvellous way with bathing an inanimate object in warmth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


This pays homage to all mothers!

Your words were vibrant and alive
And this truly captures their essence!.!.!.


Well done!
Temari

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Joy, I always love your stuff whenever I find it!. This is no exception!. Thank you for sharing it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, I really like this!. Its beautiful in so many ways!. You put a smile on my face!Www@QuestionHome@Com