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Question: I wrote this poem for my Ex-Girlfriend rate it to on a scale 1-10!.!?
I know it has some personal stuff between me and her and that might not make sense so here is there explanation:

Arts Together was the place we both worked at!.

Brenda was our boss we kinda hated!. Kyle was a kid from the day care

Will was our co-Worker who acted really really gay!.

Heres the poem:

it all started at arts together!.
with this super beautiful girl that's where i met her!.

Her name was Emily!.
she was beautiful like a melody!.

couldn't forget you if i tried!.
wouldn't stop till you were mine!.

even with my nagging ex!.
i wanted you to be my next!.

the last week we worked together!.
for us it couldn't have been any better!.

all memories in that place, the jokes, laughs, the Brenda rants!.
chasing down piper or everyday pulling kyles shirt outta his pants!.

playing with the kids after their snack!.
picking on Will when he greased his hair back!.

i love to see you smile and touch your super soft skin!.
and your amazing hair that i run my fingers in!.

us hooking up at the lake!.
august 24th ill never forget that date!.

your were super fun to be around!.
as you aimlessly drove us around the town!.

Went to the mall and the place you tutor!.
the place i first held your hand but i wish i did it sooner!.

the day we broke up it we agreed on it no fuss!.
but the way we still talk and joke i really do miss us!.


We are thinking bout getting back together and she asked me to write it 4 her!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Love all the history!!!! 10 a perfect 10!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

eheh, very cute :) 9Www@QuestionHome@Com

she will come back unless she is dumb ,you are a good man
not like most men have no talent but *****Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's a 10/10!!!!
You are so good! I totally love it! I hope you guys get back together!Www@QuestionHome@Com

9!.!.!.!. how sweet!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Aww, that's really sweet!.
I'd give it a 9 :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's so cute but your poem needs work!.
I give it a 7 out of 10!. You need to organize it better and give it an umph you know!? you're writing it for your ex so make it amazing!.
Use it as your way to win her back!.
I bet once she sees how hard you tried to write this poem for her she'll want you back!. I hope you guys get back togetherWww@QuestionHome@Com