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Question: I wrote a poem based on whats going on with me right now!.!.!. good or bad!?
sad is a word
depressed is a feeling
living is a metaphor
dead is the truth
my heart is empty
love is broken!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
No poem is bad!. It may be badly written, and even without understanding!. And often read without the meaning intended by the author, but those things don't make it bad!.
However, I personally wouldn't call it "good" either!. But not all good poems are easy to understand!. Nor should they be explained, necessarily!. If people don't understand it in some way after reading, I mean really reading, it, they never will!.
But, if it comes from your heart, and not just a bunch of words put together with little or no meaning, then yes, it's good to someone!.

Cheer up (easy to say), laug with some friends, then write another one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, it is romantic and sad!. Poems are your feelings, otherwise they are nothing!. If you like poems or think you want to try something else, try putting it as a Haiku with additions, or a Diamante or even a Cinquain poem, it will be beautiful!Www@QuestionHome@Com

reminds me of the poem "Mountain Graveyard" by Robert Morgan!. read, enjoy, keep writing and you'll get thereWww@QuestionHome@Com

Really neat!. I liked it a lot!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I give it a 7!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i rly like it its short and sweet in a deep way=]Www@QuestionHome@Com