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for my 7th grade writing class
(its not supposed to be rhyming, any i'm a seventh grader)
On a Cool,
Fresh,
Windy day,
You need to go to the lake,
All you see, the colorful sailboats,
Rushing,
Passing each other,
As they race around,
The gliding,
Almost flying through the air!


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Then as you walk up the path,
There stands the sign, in which tells the tale,
Of the lovelorn, girl as her heart has broken in two
So she had jumped of the high cliff,
Dead
As the broken heart had given the town its name,
Creve Coeur!.


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But then you look back,
Think,
You see all the animals,
The people,
The plants,
The trees,
The beauty,
The happiness,
You learn there’s no other place you’d rather beWww@QuestionHome@Com

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