Critique this poem. Please? ?

Question: Critique this poem!. Please!? !?

Little bird sitting on the fence!.
Little bird, you had a moment!.
Little bird flies away!.
Little bird should seize the day!.
Little bird put me in a trance!.
Little bird lost your chance!.

I posted this before, but I gave an explanation!.
This time I am reposting it without and I want people to give me their interpretation of it!. I want you to tell me if it is lacking in mechanics or anything!. I want you to tell me if it is missing emotion!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I don't want to come off rude -- but this didn't do it for me!. IMHO it's lacking emotion, the simple rhyme was distracting and I couldn't draw any meaning out of it!. While I can see what you had in mind, reading your explanation, I am afraid most of the readers would not have picked that up!. Just my opinion thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com