Poetry class help please?

Question: Poetry class help please!?

need help writing a poem about eyes
(their brown)

i have this much so far::

e is for eyes
big brown and beautiful

help please!! needs to be two stansas long!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

*ok i hopes its ok if i change it*

Look into big brown eyes
So beautiful when it crys
such a beauty to be seen
Like stars that love to gleam
Soft as melted chocolate
And swirly as her hair (the softest)
So much seen!.!.!.
through her big brown eyes that gleam
Never seen such a beauty
As big brown eyes , truelyWww@QuestionHome@Com

eyes: they're brown!. that means they are brown!. "Theirs" means it belongs to them!.Think Puppies: Their brown eyes are lovely!.

And it's stanzas, not stansas!.

E is for eyes; big, brown and beautiful-
Y is for you; loyal and dutiful
E is for ever the most worthy friend to my heart-
S is for standing beside me since the start!.

I dunno, I just went with what you started, but see!? You can just make up any old thing!. Go with whatever sounds good to you!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

*e is for eyes
big brown and beautiful*
they make me feel mesmerized
taking me in with a pull

soft and kind they are
taking me into a trance
where i have more fun than when in a bar
making my heart beat and prance

hope this helpsWww@QuestionHome@Com

=]] ummm ill try!.

u can tell by the eyes if lies are behind them!. You can tell if its your lee-pin love if if u look deep enough!. tell me the truth cause below them beautiful brown things lie the hero in you!.

sorry if i dident help!. =]]Www@QuestionHome@Com

how many lines each stanzaWww@QuestionHome@Com

good startWww@QuestionHome@Com

and awoke when comes along a frightWww@QuestionHome@Com

they glisten in the light

That is one more line!.!.!. I don't have anything else!.!.!. I hope that helps!!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com