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Little darling don’t you cry
I see that teardrop in your eye
Mommy had to go away
But maybe she’ll come back someday

Things just happen at our age
And maybe sometimes it is just a stage
Things that we will soon regret
But we never will forget

Your mom and I we had a fight
In front of you it wasn’t right
So come a little closer dear
I’ll wipe away that flowing tear

Daddy’s staying home today
I just can not, just go away
As she looked up from her place
I saw a smile upon her face

Lets make a plan to spend our day
So hurry up be on our way
To the park we will go
To watch the gentle waters flow

We’ll climb a mountain way up high
Closer to the golden sky
At the top we’ll make a pact
That once a week we will come back

It's you and me together now
We’ll make it through I know some how
Till mommy knows she shouldn’t flee
Be with us two, and always be


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
very heartfelt!.!.!.your love shows through!.!.we can all but try our best!.!.with enough love hopefully all will be great!.!.for you guys thanks!.!.for sharing!.!.good vibes your way!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is a beautiful poem!. Written with understanding, sorrow, and
sympathy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is a poem written so a little girl could understand, and it is sad!.!.!. hope it has a good ending in a future poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very beautiful, i hope it is not from a personal experienceWww@QuestionHome@Com

*sighs*, sad, sounds like a "divorce" poem !Www@QuestionHome@Com