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Question: When is a simple good evening kiss more than a kiss (poetically stated)!?
Eyslund's poem got me to thinking!. Here's my simple thought!.

"Good Evening"

My evenings lost in memories;
alone I lay no one to please!.
No sunbeams share my empty space,
No lips to touch my weathered face!.

I'm only left to dream of you,
your long soft kiss way overdue,
one last thing I'd request you do,
please bend over, I enjoy the view!.

Note: Y/A wanted to put this in "Society & Culture > Holidays > Valentine's Day"

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
*bends obediently*

*gets cream pie from refrigerator*

*throws pie in Bob's face*

*then kisses Bob*

Good Evening, yourself! Loved the poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

alone I lie, no-one to please (UK English translation - have I got the sense right!?) Though I don't suppose it much matters - it's just me and my obsessive personality disorder!. =)

Oh, Bob, there was me getting all sentimental and dewy-eyed and then you spoiled it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

She struggles to rise from the floor
In a child-like stance
Bent fully in half!.

Tears streaming down her cheeks
As the image of joy
Of a belly laugh!.


*curtsies and blows kisses to Bob* Gotta be Miller Time, care to join me!?

*hugs to Evad for starring this*Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely, lonely poem!. Not familiar with Wyslund!. I would have a last request that would have a lot more than "please bend over!." Can't imagine putting that on Holidays or Valentines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh - how lovely the view! Guess word "kiss" put this into Valentine's day - better than being classified in "health" - LOL ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely, lonely poem!.
And slightly bent!.!.!.

Uh!.!.!.!.which view!? Front or back!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm absolutely rolling on the floor with tears streaming, I'm having hysterics!!! My love said that verbatim when he visited last! Men!
Bravo!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You could incorporate this into your future wedding vows!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I wish I could answer but I'm not supposed to reply to Q's that have the words "bend over"!.

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Quite to the exact point ye are, me hearty! Alone, you say!.!.!.!.not anymore!
Coffee in Houma!.!.!.RSVPWww@QuestionHome@Com

You are a scoundrel!.Made me laugh,and you know I like to do that!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your last line made me chuckle!. Must mean I like it!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com