Question Home

Position:Home>Poetry> Have you ever wanted to leave? read and say what you think?


Question: Have you ever wanted to leave!? read and say what you think!?
hey this is my 3rd poem i wrote tell me what you think!.!.

Leave
how i'd like to leave, and become me
leave this house this neighborhood, this school, this city, this state
to wake up to the crisp morning breeze
grab some coffee
and leave
to leave these people!.they're not like me
they dont like what i like
they dont see what i see
they dont want what i wasnt
they dont want
to leave
no, im not depressed!.Im not crying out for any attention!.
i just want change!.not this same old suburban outlook on life!.
i want to leave everything
and start over
to become
meWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yeah i like it could be improved a little but hey it is your third so just keep growing and learning!. To me it was very touching!. I really liked it!. You should keep writing poems maybe one day they could get published!. I would give this one an 8/10 Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!.!.!.sounds exactly like my life!.!.!.!.!.i love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

you didnt write this!.!. Im not stupidWww@QuestionHome@Com