What do you think bout this poem?

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Lol!. always wanted to say that somewhere!.

An Addiction

I love her, but I hate her!.
And i'm crawling on my knees!.
Trying to figure this **** out!.
What the **** do I need!?

Am I looking for Compassion,
Or do I crave for attention!?

My mind is in suspense, and
I'm starting to get addicted!.

I'm torn between two thoughts
And my mind is trying to cope!.
My heart is beating so ****** fast
From the adrenaline of false hope!.

Is this what you call Compassion!?
When I crave for you attention!.

My mind is in suspense, and
I'm starting to get addicted!.

I hate her, but love her!.
Now i'm begging, on my knees!.
What the **** do I do!.
Somebody, tell me!. Please!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it, very heart felt~Www@QuestionHome@Com

As a poem of pleading it is well thought out!. It rhymes and its meaning is clear and it has a certain bounce to it!. For those qualities I can say well done!.
However, and you knew I was going to comment upon this, Your choice of some words is inexcusable!. Now do not tell me I need not have read it for if I had not have done how could I have comment upon it!?
There is a saying "As a man thinks, so he is" I think that you can do better than this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com