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Question: Would you like to read my last words for the day!?
Under the moon and a handful of stars
I wander off this cool autumn night
My mind is troubled my eyes unfocused
The nerves in my neck stretched tight
…Fight or flight…
I reach the river, I slide down the bank
River waters rippling in moonlight
The leaves on the trees stirring
It comforts me, this sight
…Calm and soothing
The moon in the sky looks down
I can its face quite clearly
As if to say go home my child
Go home where you’re safe from harm
… It is only an illusion
I lay my head on my pillow now
My blankets warm around me
My thoughts wrapped up in tissue
Waiting for sleep to over take me
…just another day
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Tomorrow is waiting for you to be!.!.!.!.!.dream on!.!.!.write on!.!.!.be onWww@QuestionHome@Com

Your words are so beautiful, but, I found this poem sad, is it prophetic!? Do these thoughts disturb you at times, are you fighting something!? It looks to me as if something was seriously bothering the writer and sleep was a relief from the reality at that time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Calm and soothing!. I like the river image!. Take me to the river, drop me in the water!.

My bed is calling me!. I can relate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sleep in blissful sleep, knowing that I and the universe are watching over you as you rest yourself for another day of fulfillment!.
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WOW!. that was great words!. I love poetry and you sound like you will write more good words in the future!. good luck!. different feelings cause me to write and poetry makes me feel better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I slept well last night, even though I didn't read this until morning!.
Very nice

Under the moon and a handful of stars
I wander off this cool autumn night

It is only an illusion!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, and Whew! its beautiful, well imagined, and well done!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

For some strange reason, I feel like taking a walk!.
It is a beautiful night!.
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beautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com

I too, have heard the moon speak to me, as it gazes down!.!.!.lovely poem!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

calmingWww@QuestionHome@Com

that was AMAZING!.!.!.YOUR WRITING MAKES ME HAPPYWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow i lov eitWww@QuestionHome@Com